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Post by HeroOfTimeAndWind on Mar 31, 2005 23:36:31 GMT -5
;D Here is Chapter one, the other one is like a prologue Zelda follows Link to the local stables. The stables looked wretched and old, as Link went up to them he started feeling sorry for Epona and her captivity in the slumish small stable. Link calls for Epona to spot her out of all of the Kingsmen's horses, and mules. Epona replies with a loud noise that semed like a horn from England. Link yells, "Im coming Epona keep nieghing so I can find you in all these-" he stops as he heard a loud squishy noise he looks down at his boot and sighs, "grr.....not again, why don't they clean the stables every once in a while, I oughta have this reported to the King as negligence....grrrr....." Link finally finds his way to Epona who was now old and decrepit, but nevertheless she was still the BEST stallion ever. Link releases her hooks and ties, and asks her if he should ride her with the sadle, she neighed angrily and Link steps back "ok, ok, we goota go soon but first I need to clean up." Epona walks outside the stable and Link goes to a nearby hose, when all of a sudden he hears a scream from outside the stables, "Yeeeeagh! eek ekk!" Link hears this cries and drops the hose that was still left running. He runs out of the stables and sees what was going on. A young girl was being attacked by a small time crook. "HEY get away from her you thief!!!" Link yells in disgust "kehehehe, fufufufu, keheheheh what're you gonna do about it wierdo, and what kinda get up is that!?!?! Kahahaha!" "humph.... no one, and I MEAN NO ONE MAKES FUN OF MY CLOTHES!!!" Link lunges at him with his fist, thinking he wouldn't need his sword. but the thief simply stands to the side and Link falls to the floor "Kahahahah......." the thief laughs ominously "you will not defeat me for I am going to be your worst enemy................Mwuahahahah!!!!" he says in a hefty laughter as he dissapears into the sky. Link looks at him fly away and wonders who he was and how in heck he could do that. Just then, Zelda appears, "LINK, what in Hyrule are you doing we gotta to go!!!" Link replies fearfully "I think we may have another problem....or is it connected...." Zelda simply gruffs "Link, what ARE you talking about...?" Link replies with fear in his eyes, "It can't be....is it HIM? is it REALLY GANONDORF???" Zelda laughs "Link, what are you talking about, we defeated him 12 years ago " Link replies with, "Maybe so....but what if he broke free of the great sages bind...? what if he killed them all? what if he..............Saria......no.................NO!!! It can't be! Is she.........dead?" ~~~To Be CONTINUED~~~ Narrarator: well, you gotta love Link and his assuming mind, heheheh, well you all are in for a real TREAT! Link will soon find himself in a bind, should he go after the Triforce? Should he try to find Saria, his old long time forest friend? or should he Find out who was that strange man Link says is Ganon..... and IS HE GANON??? we'll find out in the coming episodes of Legend of Zelda; The Hero of Time, Veteran of Winds! Give me replies, flames whatever just make it tasteful and insightful... i dont want no oh that was good, or that sux, tell me why it is good, or why it sux (hey, im starting to sound like my English Teacher!!! meep) oh and yes I want a few replies before i begin the next one, that way i can change what there is needed to be changed about my writing, or be able to write without knowing you guys disliked the Episode i just did.... Thank you, Domo Arigatou!
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Post by HeroOfTimeAndWind on Apr 2, 2005 4:40:07 GMT -5
:-/Well....there were not any replies on the last chapter...but i guess no news is good news If you were busy or something and you wanted to reply to a certain chapter just type in the chapter it is then give me details on what you think
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Post by HeroOfTimeAndWind on Apr 2, 2005 5:33:31 GMT -5
;D Chatper 2!!!
"No it can't be, Zelda, I think the sages have died!" Link explains. "Link, how can that be?" Zelda starts to contradict, "Ganon has died by our hands, he can't be alive.....but who was that man that flew away......wait......Link I think you are right let's go to the Temple of Time to try and contact the sages!" "Yes....I fear the worst.....You remember Saria right? she was one of those sages, she was my long time friend when I was residing in the Forest...." With that Link and Zelda run off towards the local Temple of Time. Link remembers the Temple of Time as a sturdy looking building with decorations of the past strangling the sides of the now decrepit old walls. However the enchanted gargoyles and side decorations seem to have not flailed in time's progress.... Link and Zelda walk up to the doors, and Link forces the rusty entryway open. As they walk in, they notice the smell of Spring, Winter, Fall, and Summer. Link walks up to the alter, which had the sacred stones of the three habitats of three totally different races. Kokiri emerald, Goron ruby, and Zora Saphire, all in the order Link had left it as a child. He said a few sacred words he learned from the Hyrule family's ancestorial tombstone, Ocarina of Time's Song of Time. As he played many memories came to him flashing through... Link's first fight against Gannon, and Rallies of the fight of Aghnim, His troulbe on a small Island...his memorie of Marin and the others still remained.... He also remembered the day he first met his now married princess, Zelda. In his flashback of the day he married her he recalls the day of their vows. "Zelda....I will always love you, and forever we shall uphold the Hyrulian families name and pass it on to our kids, as they will to theirs....No matter what I will always love you Zelda...." Link reminescence of the old days end when he sees a horrible premonition, but all he could hear was the cry of Zelda under his kids bawlings.... "FATHER NOOO!!!" he hears Toshio cry "Daddy...? Daddy, are you ok? Daddy........please wake up........*sob* DADDY!!!!" And his beloved Zelda "LINK!!! Link, please don't stop... Please Link say something don't-" His dream intterupted by Zelda's voice hurrying him to open the Sacred door of Time. "Uhhhh......Oh....Yes princess!" He plays the rest of the melody, wondering what that was he saw at the end of his flashback. With that the door etches it's way open as if time had concealed it forever. Link takes a step in and he hears laughter echoing throughout the lonely room, it either was his flashback kicking in again...or it was real. He asks Zelda if she had heard it, but she says no, and wonders if Link is going senile. Link laughs and replies with a 'no'. He walks up to the sacred Srowd of Time, the Master Sword. Both her and him put their hands on it, Link's ontop her's. and then a flash of light takes them what feels like up. Blue and white shimmering lights flie down as they head to the Sacred Realm of Light, where the sages had last been seen. Link looks around and sees nothing, and looks at the ground and sees the sacred medallions broken, and crushed, in many ways, only one was visible, as SHE steps into view. "Saria? is that you, Saria?" Link says hoping it is her... not remebering what the medallions symbolized.... ~To Be CONTINUED~~
Narrarator: Well, there you have it, who do you think Link sees, Saria? or some other medallion holder? You will find out on the next episode of Legend of Zelda: Hero of Time, Veteran of Winds....
Well hope you liked it....I have nothing to say at this point so.....just reply if possible please. Thank you all for letting me have this oppotunity to grace you with my ability, It IS An Honor!
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Post by Myogey Creator on Apr 2, 2005 12:49:57 GMT -5
Pretty good so far.b ;D
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Post by HeroOfTimeAndWind on Apr 3, 2005 8:44:59 GMT -5
;D Chapter 3!!!
Link, staring into the abyss of the sages sanctum, sees only th sillhouette of a girl, tall, yet slim and curvy. Link comes to the conclusion that it is Nabooru, the Gerudo warrior princess. However her voice seemed different somehow than Nabooru... somewhat younger and cutsey. She staps in saying, "Link.....my hero of Time and vast warrior of neverending winds, you have come regarding the missing sages have you not?" Link responds to the dreamy voice of the young girl, "yes....I have, but please step into the light are you Saria?" She steps into the light and it is Saria, but older, and more vast in sexuality. Her body, in perfect cleavage, and curvy lines, steps clearly into the light whereas Link would be able to see. She stands there with the same cute smile as she was once as a Kokiri.....Though that was problem, wasn't she a Kokiri? "Saria, why are you older, wouldn't you still undertake the same stature as you were 12 years ago? Are you not Kokiri?" Link asks in an aperation and observation of her maturing age. "Link, my long time friend, I am Saria, as you see before you, and I am Kokiri, but I am a sage, a missing link to the Hyrulian Family. I am not ALL Kokiri.... I figured you would know by now." Saria says with a little disapointment in her longing voice. Link stares at her with longing eyes, "Yes, Saria it IS you, I remeber that spunky attitud anywhere, My long time friend I have missed you in my travels!" Saria replies with a nod, and says, "The Sages are fine but it's the medallions and the Triforce you should worry about... I will help you with what power I have, but please find the Triforce and stay safe." Saria continues, "Oh, and you are married, to whom may I ask?" Link replies with happiness, "I am now a Hyrulian, of the Hyrule sacred family!" "Ah! So that meas.....Zelda I am glad you have married this fine warrior, Hyrule is sure to stay safe now!" Zelda replies with, "Ah, but yes we are now married with kids of our own!" "I see, well their names can wait... but you two need to work together and find the pieces of the medallion that are missing from the ones already here. I hear Ganon has them, so take him down like you always do my young hero!" Link triumphantly yells, "I will do my best Saria, For my family, Hyrule and You!" Link says. The two Link and Zelda were then transported back to the Temple of Time. "Let's go and find our-" Zelda was intterupted by a loud forceful blast of a noise. Link and her fall to the ground, and look towards the explosion. "AGH! The Castle is under attack!!!" Link exclaims. "OUR BABIES!!! LINK! WE GOTTA SAVE THEM!!!" Zelda yells right after Link. They run to the castle and see it in ruins. They run inside and see nothing but rubble and colapsed rubbage. "Toshio! Aryll! Where are you! Answer ME!!!!" Link yells... but no luck. Then thy hear a laughter that seamt very familiar to Link from his hallutionation from earlier. "hrmm....hehehahahah!" the vioce laughs, "You fools, your kids are lost to me, they are now in my possesion! You shall not find them for I am Koroku, God of Zephyr lights! I was called here by a higher authority to destroy the castle and take the 'young lad's' kids!" Link yells in anger "What! You think you will get away with this-this insult! Hyrule will have your HEAD for this! you bastard!!!" Zelda screams "KYA! you evil MAN, how could you, who sent you! tell us or you will perish!" "No.....you will fight me soon enough, but I am STRONGER than Ganon ever was.... You will die just like your children will...Goodbye fools!" He leaves in a flash. Link calls his horse and follows his evil scent, but loses him fast. "ARGH! I couldn't keep up...... I need to go back and find Zelda......Oh, kids please....stay safe.....don't do anything to make Koroku mad......" ~~~To Be CONTINUE~~~
Narrarator: Will Link be able to face off this new evil that boasts his newfound strength against Ganon? Will he be able to save his kids? Will he find and use the aid of the medallions? We'll find out in the next episode of The Legend of Zelda; The Hero of Time, Veteran of Winds!!!
Well....keep the comments comin thx Myogey for keeping the incentive in me to finish this off! oh and sorry im dragging a little bit....I was like 5 AM when i did it, on an All nighter!!! CYA SOON ALL!
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Post by Myogey Creator on Apr 3, 2005 8:47:01 GMT -5
Wow. ;D
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Post by HeroOfTimeAndWind on Apr 4, 2005 18:14:20 GMT -5
;D Chapter 4 Link, seeing the entrance to Hyrule town, starts to contemplate his failure to save his children. "Ugh.....why....does this have to happen....why me......why not......" Link loses trak of what he was saying and sees Zelda wating hopfully near. Link hitches Epona near a general store, and looks at Zelda regretfully... "I-I'm s sorry...my love, I could not catch up to him....Our kids...are gone...." Zelda looks at Link, and starts crying, as she looks down and falls to her knees. "Link....what'll we do, our babies are gone and we have no clue where that evil tyrant went..." Link looks down at her and says hopfully, "Zelda he did say there was someone he was taking orders from right? Just maybe Ganon is behind all this! We can still find them I have a hunch where they may be!" Zelda looks at him still red around the eyes and a few tears around cheek, "You....do?" Link looks happily hoping to sell her by hope, "Yes, Since it may be Ganon, we can check the Gerudo thief hideout and ask around, I still have this!" Pulls out the small trinket he got from one of the Gerudo, and at that he remembers Nabooru, "See...and we can go confront Nabooru, Ganon's second in command!" Link picks up Zelda by her sides, and holds her near him... "Zelda...in my honor and courage...I WILL save our children!" He then kisses her to seal the vow, and Zelda whispers under her voice, "Link...you are so strong, so many people look to you for hope and comfort...I love you Link, and I hope you are right...." The two set out and say their goodbyes to the townspeople. When the town gates are past them, Link strikes Epona's side and they go faster. "Epona old girl, you are still # 1 in speed! After this you are gonna get a sugar cube!" Epona neighs at Link's comment and goes even faster for the two. Link looks at Zelda who seamt to be happy, but really was worried, "Zelda you know, when we were younger, you would always come and fight alongside with me, protecting the triforce of wisdom, and now it's like reliving the old days... keheheh my hair wasn't as sexy, it was brown then...." Link laughs, "Do you remember, how when Gannon always picked at us with his small time minions and we would always prevail, then he would strike at us from the heart, with efforts to getting the Trifoce of wisdom....We would still kick the deku out of him!" Zelda replies with a nod, "Yea and you would always end the fight and triumphantly ask me to kiss you....kee hee, it was so constant, almost everyday you would say..." Zelda makes a funny voice to try and sound like him in his preteen years, " 'I saved you princess, now kiss me!' Then I would say no in a very snippy fasion, and you respond with the 'ExxcuUse me princess!'" With that the two start laughing histyrically. Before they know it, they are at the front area of the Gerudo hide out where the large river was, it seemed to cut through at the earth for so long it was so far down to the waters below...the bridge from Links early feat was no longer there. "egh...eheh, so far down...." He says looking at Epona, "You think you can still make it?" Epona replies with a loud triumphant neigh, "Ok,ok, not so loud the Gerudo my here you... Link orders Epona to fall back a little, and turn. "uh...Zelda hold on tight...this may end up ugly..." Zelda hears this and makes a short little 'eep' "Hyagh!" Link yells as he strkes Epona in the backside, Epona neighs and starts to run as fast as she can, "Comon Epona faster than that! come on! you can do it!!!" Link cheers as their life may be at stake on the very horse Link had raised. "Link counts in his mind at the ground, "1.....2.....3.....4.....5....6..." Link counts as the ground was speeding by, he was hoping not to get to ten for that meant they were proceeding slower then Epona used to. "Link Yells, "TEN! aghhhh!!!! Link shuts his eyes and he hears Epona make a loud shove off the ground, and all Link could hear was the wind of the speeding air. "Link forces himself to look and sees Epona is making good progress. he gets the courage to sit up and yell, "YEAHH!!!!! EPONA YOU RULE!!!!" Zelda looks up while still in the air, and starts screaming, "Kyaaah!!!" they hear a loud thump and breathing nothing more... Zelda feels no one in front of her as she sits on the triumphant horse. She looks down and Link's face was in the dirt. "Kyahahah!!!" Zelda laughs loudly, Link replies with a low "ugh....guglup shu......" Link pulls his head out and looks at Zelda, "What, what, what! You were screamin your pretty li'l head off! Besides i just hurt my head bad, you didn't so HAH!" Zelda jumps off of Epona trying to immatate Link's fall, and Link, red in the face, says "Did I fall like that? grr....That's it." Link playfully grabs Zelda by the arms and starts to spin her around. Link falls back and Zelda falls ontop... "Hmm...I like it when your on bottom..." Zelda jokes, "keheh, That's because you're spoiled, princess." Link throws the joke back, she then knees him in the groin, "at least I don't have bad timing Link!" she starts to laugh loudly, Link replies when he gets his breath back, "Well excUUse me princess!" The two lost in love joke back and forth not knowing what evil they are about to face ahead... ~~~To Be CONTINUE~~~ Narrarator: Link is now near the Gerudo Border, and he has just made the accomplishment of old, Link sits there and remininces about days of old, but What, or who is the evil they will face in the Valley of sand, Gerudo territory, or something more.... We'll see next time on the Legend of Zelda; The Hero of Time, Veteran of Winds! Well......that took awhile.....but hey....Im tired and sick...so who cares I like the Game so why get sick and not do it! ME ROOL, ISH KEWL! keep the comments comin! well mainly you Myogey....keheheh!
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I have no fear. becasue if u do fear it, you will never grow stronger
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Post by StoryTeller on Apr 5, 2005 0:55:00 GMT -5
i was wrong this story of yurs is getting (famously) good in a way since not in money but in laughter, get lol since u have tons of parts that are funny like when they start making jokes & drama is jsut perfect.
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Post by HeroOfTimeAndWind on Apr 5, 2005 23:55:16 GMT -5
;DThank you very much Storyteller, I appreciate your sound comment on my work, although I'm sorry Im a little under the weather today, so nothing will come in, please bear with me, I have got other things needed to be done outsideof the forum. Again I am sorry for the inconvinience of you adept readers. Stay tune I will continue the story tomorrow.
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Post by HeroOfTimeAndWind on Apr 7, 2005 22:35:43 GMT -5
;D Chapter 5!!! "Ah....Zelda let's go now....We need to see if Nabooru will be here...I know she was in one of the medallions, but..... I have a strong hunch she is here, so is that mystery guy....", Link explains, he gets up after Zelda and the both of them walk towards the encampment of the Gerudo. They finally get inside but see none of the Gerudo gaurding the entrance, "Ah.....where are they, I never knew the Gerudo to slack from their post...." Link says, and Zelda adds, "Ya... I knew a young girl in here, she joined the Gerudo a while back, but....." The two stop to finally see someone's sillhoette near the building. All they hear was a low groan and moan, "Ah.....who is there please answer me, are you are gerudo?" The voice only answers with another groan... "uhhrggghh..........." Link yells again, "Please, can't you talk, we need to know where to find Ganon, or Nabooru!" The sillhouette steps in the light to be a deformed, ugly looking Gerudo infantry, "Agh! What happened to you? who did this!" Again with a grueling groan, "uhhhghhh.........." Zelda pipes in, "Link, she is a Redead!!! What happened here!!! Ganon wouldn't attack his own people!!!" Link replies, "Yes, yes he would... If he wanted he would kill his own dear mother to gain what he wanted....." The Redead monster screams and shrieks at Link and Zelda, and they find themselves paralyzed with fear... "Ack, I can't move, It is a Redead!!!" Link tries to move but fails, the Redead inches closer and closer shrieking with red glowing absent eyes. "SKREEEEEEEEH!!!!!!!" the Redead yells. Just then a young stout litle boy jumps in, "Yaaahg!" Link says, "hrmm.....that scream sounds familiar! wait....it's......." the young lad kills off the monstrosity and in turn remedies Link and Zelda's mobility. The young kid steps into view, "Hey...you look like me! what's the deal here!" Link replies, "YOUR ME!!!!!!!!" Zelda screams, "Oh My GOD! He IS you!!!!" ~~~ To Be CONTINUE~~~ Narrarator: Is this for real, or is it just Ganon playing tricks, Is Link really meeting 'Himself?' Why was the Gerudo infantry Redeadified, Is it Ganon's doing or is it his disciple? We'll will find out on the next Legend of Zelda; The Hero of Time, Veteran Winds!!! Ya....I know it's short but..... Well keep the comments coming thank you Myogey and ST for giving me the incentive to work on what MAY become the naxt LoZ title! ;DI can dream can't I? ;D
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I have no fear. becasue if u do fear it, you will never grow stronger
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Post by StoryTeller on Apr 8, 2005 18:28:37 GMT -5
np, the only thing that will puzzle us well u continue ch. 5? best of luck Signed, Story Teller
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Post by Myogey Creator on Apr 9, 2005 16:32:06 GMT -5
Excellent so far. ;D
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I have no fear. becasue if u do fear it, you will never grow stronger
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Post by StoryTeller on Apr 10, 2005 21:29:07 GMT -5
myong is right so keep it up
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Post by cody on Apr 15, 2005 8:18:37 GMT -5
When is the new Chapter comeing out?
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Post by HeroOfTimeAndWind on Apr 15, 2005 11:38:08 GMT -5
Ah....so sorry, I have been under the weather lately... My tonsils grew back and they are all swollen, and to top it off I had a fever a while back I will continue soon, but until then keep an eye out for the next chapter of LoZ;HTVW
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