a cool story part8

[StoryTeller]

link arives in his home land kokri forest. he goes to this land to train better get more suplies. link climbs up into his home to see a person in there. he grabs his mighty sword & jumps right intohis home with sword pointing in front of him. hmm, brother i thought u would never have made it here. brother, who are u? & why did u call me brother? this stranger rises to reavel him self as shadow link. i thought i....... slayed me not quiet 4 as long as u are alive i wont die. then why are u here? why else to restore the histroy & order to hyrule & u cant win without me. what! i so can win without u! o yeah u died 1 once to king hyong with this kingsaxe u almost died to the spider of the earth element. fine then why do u wnat to come really? o so now its a law i cant be with my brother? well no..... then lets get training! link coundt trust shadow link since well he doesnt know why he cant trust him except he is being to jolly for a shadow. shadow link after deafet by link: dont worry, u will not die but u must find yur true path. u are the sage of sprirt. shadow link cloes his eyes & wakes up to see to hear birds singing everything irrited shadow link, he wanted silence so he siad SILENCE!! every sound had stoped. shadow link siad music. music then begain to sound the empty area of which had no sound. then the music started to change & dark clouds formed over the area shooting lighting then a person in red cloak came to shadow link & siad: yur final test u msut beat the creature of the earth. then the person vanished & the earth was beging to shake & shows shadow link's darker side but this shadow link was 40x bigger than shadow link. & 50 times stronger. shadow link grabs his shadow master sword from his back. so did the shadow giant. yur sword aint better than mine. he jumps into the air & spins swinging his sword at the same time to create a great aura around shadow link & his shadow master blade. the creature had became no more or so what shadow link had thought. the shadow had created an arena so he cant escape nor could shadow link. the shadow was his size & can copy every move he would make. shadow link rember what he had did when fighting link. he copeyed his every move. well it wont work since my shadow blade is the orginal differnt side to the master sword. the shadow link jumped & spin like shadow link did but shadow link deystroyed his sword with 1 slash of his blade. the creatures place had been taken by the person in the red cloak also the shadow arena had gone with the shadow. the red cloak person siad this time: u have pasted u must know help link. why should i?!? u are his brother u must help him. persent time: come on link cant u fight any better? why dont u try this? so link threw a giant boulder at shadow link & shadow link cut the rock in half & the rock didnt even touch the warrior. went to the there room in the giant tree. so link & shadow link had to remain in there since shadow link knew if link ever died he would & even if link got rincarcanited he woundt. but link pasted the game of chance so shadow link did not die. they rest in there home & leave tommorw. why is shadow link being so brotherly & will link ever save zelda?
to be countinued........................